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writing brush

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As the title says, I'll be writing my own fanfiction here (not the one @tomxie worked with). The content is some relationships or stories that I like. I may have problems with the settings or the most basic syntax, so please understand, thank you. Also, I don't think I need to upload my manuscript, right, haha, my writing sucks. . . Also, @tomxie seems to be quarantined after going to Xinjiang lab, he should have enough time now to help me check for errors and even translate, hahaha! thank you all!
 

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I'd love to see your writing! I know language barriers can be difficult, so feel free to ask for feedback if you're unsure of anything. I hope tomxie is doing well too.

(Also, I'm going off-topic, but I love the artwork in your avatar! The artist who drew it is one of my favorites.)
 

writing brush

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I'd love to see your writing! I know language barriers can be difficult, so feel free to ask for feedback if you're unsure of anything. I hope tomxie is doing well too.

(Also, I'm going off-topic, but I love the artwork in your avatar! The artist who drew it is one of my favorites.)
Oh,thanks, I will try my best and for avatar I just found it on pixiv I just like it because artist painted all the characters on it!
 
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As the title says, I'll be writing my own fanfiction here (not the one @tomxie worked with). The content is some relationships or stories that I like. I may have problems with the settings or the most basic syntax, so please understand, thank you. Also, I don't think I need to upload my manuscript, right, haha, my writing sucks. . . Also, @tomxie seems to be quarantined after going to Xinjiang lab, he should have enough time now to help me check for errors and even translate, hahaha! thank you all!
hahaha, yes I have been quarantined... Alright,translator online!
 

writing brush

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It seems like many days have passed since I last started this program, sorry, I'll finish writing and translating the first chapter this week. The title of this story is "writing brush's stories" but I decided to list it as part of "xeno remake and complete project (English part)". About the English part may include this thread and "some stories" (I really think this title is very bad), but this is mainly to write some stories of Shion looking for kossy after ep3, I may have to think about the specific content (no will procrastinate). Of course, since this thread is mainly about writing my story, it is likely to randomly write a side story outside of the main storyline (it may not match the setting, make do with it!).
Then, I can't seem to find a suitable foreign website to place my writing (if you can recommend a free one, it will be a great help for us!), so I still use the method of pasting directly here. , hope to get your understanding.
Also, since Xie and I both need to prepare for our final exams (it's very important for us to get into graduate school), I decided to alternate the writing of this thread with "some stories". It is expected to be updated once a week (maybe two a week when I am very free, and one for three days during the summer vacation.
Finally, thank you again for your support, the Chinese edition of some stories has not been viewed as high as here on some Chinese novel websites (although it seems that the writing about xeno-series is not at all).
Still the same After that I was still a writer and Xie helped me with the translation.
 
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"Happy Birthday Shion," Shion said to himself on the ship.
Today is her 27th birthday, and it has been 4 years since she set sail.
Navigating in the universe without the UMN system is unimaginable. Everyone was very unaccustomed to it at first. When they were subconsciously preparing to jump on a long journey, they found that they had nothing to do. The connection between the various planets has also become very sparse. In addition to the long travel, communication has also been extremely difficult. Jr. hasn't called his good friend MOMO in two years.
"Does it really make any sense to go on like this?" Shion said to himself.
Her worries are not superfluous, the earth has only a rough coordinate now, and no one knows its exact location, let alone Chaos, Jin, Nephilim and KOSMOS who were transferred.
"KOSMOS" Shion thought of the last picture of kosmos she saw through her heart: she was floating in space not far from the earth, unconscious.
"Is she still alive?" Shion didn't know how many times he'd thought about this question over the years. Now, the only hope is the last image and the various memories of her and kosmos, who hurriedly said goodbye without even taking a picture. But I didn't expect that this goodbye may be a goodbye in the next life. Although through some methods, she saw her memories of her previous life, but she still thinks that if some things are not done this time, they will no longer be hers. memory, why not?
Kosmos is the name she cares about most in her heart, k. . .
"Happy birthday, Shion," Jr. suddenly came in and said to her. Allen in the back was holding a big piece of cake. It says "Happy Birthday Uzuki" with cream on it.
"Uzuki..." Shion thought of his brother, "JIn where are you too?"
Although at the end she felt her brother's death, but after all these years, she still believed that her brother was still alive somewhere in this world, maybe like Nephilim? A phantom, hey. . .
"What's wrong Shion?" Allen asked with concern, seeing Shion lowered his head again.
"It's okay, it's okay, let's start first!" Shion smiled again and said, "Well, thank you for remembering my birthday."
"But mine doesn't seem to be remembered..." Jr. said disappointedly.
"That's because we don't even know your birthday! Honestly, do you have the 'birth' stage? Ah-" Allen returned, and was taken by Jr. He stepped hard.
"Okay, everyone, stop making trouble."
"Yeah, let's celebrate"
Shion's eyes were wet as everyone sang. Under the haze, she saw that everyone was celebrating her birthday, kosmos lit candles, Jin, chaos, Neph and Feb and Jr, sang songs together, Kevin hugged her and celebrated her, and Almadel handed her a bouquet of flowers.
"Thanks, you guys" Shion cried out.
"Shion, what's wrong with you Shion?" She heard Jr. and Allen shouting again, but she couldn't tell if it was reality or fantasy.
However, all this disappeared after she blew out the candle.
There was still a piece of cake in front of him, and Allen and Jr. were overwhelmed.
"woohoo"Shion cried much louder.

Off topic:
The first chapter is finally out. It feels so sad, and the tone of XS is a bit similar. . . Finish
 
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writing brush

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A few months later, Shion had completely forgotten all the things on her birthday. It was like this every year. She didn't know if she had had a decent birthday in the past few years.
However, one thing that caught everyone's attention and got them excited was that they were about to reach the next planet they could dock on. After the UMN hyperspace tunnel vanished, they almost traveled through the universe for months before reaching the next place.
However, the planet I visited this time is a bit special. It was just discovered, and it is also an extremely imperfect functional facility. At that time, only 3 team members and 2 realians were sent. After exploring an area, they just built a mooring station, waiting for supplies and others to arrive.
"It's almost Shion, you have to start getting ready!" Jr said to her excitedly during breakfast
"This time, you don't need to prepare any login plan forms, item inspections, etc., everyone just prepares the documents. It's not a very good place. It's too childish to care so much," Allen said to him.
"What are you talking about! Are you trying to get kicked off the boat again?" Jr said angrily.
"Okay, everyone, stop arguing, Allen is right, this time we only need to prepare the documents, we just stop for a while to see what we need, and we will leave soon. "In the end, it was Shion who came out and made a mess (tomxie: I can't translate this sentence, it's too difficult, I don't know if this Chinese saying can't be understood at all? It roughly means "say good things to both parties")

In the afternoon, everyone could already see the general appearance of the planet. Most of the entire planet was covered with green forests, and only a few places had scattered oceans.
"In a way, it's the exact opposite of where we're going!" Jr said solemnly, looking at it.
"Well, so to speak, but..."
"Ready to log in, everyone is ready!"
The spaceship tumbled toward the planet, and the familiar feeling of increasing gravity gradually increased, and the feeling of nothingness in deep space gradually diminished.
"There are still 3 minutes before entering the atmosphere, everyone is ready"
The people in the cabin had already secured themselves to the safety seats, ready for the sudden increase in gravity to strike.
"50, 49, 48..." Shion counted silently in his heart, "How much time is left?!"
It's really not a good feeling to get close to a huge object in the void, it reminds me of the feeling when a person is about to die (jump off a building?)
The high-frequency shaking had already begun, and the outside of the spacecraft was also lit up with a faint red light.
"It always feels like it's not a good sign." Shion instantly recalled the unpleasant memory. The damage of the logic thruster, KOSMOS jumped down from the cabin, Chaos' magical move.
"The logic thruster is normal, ready to stabilize the posture, please pay attention to whether it is already in a safe position."
There was a loud noise behind the ship, and the angle of the ship became gentler.
Another annoying minute.
"The spacecraft entered the atmosphere safely and is preparing to head towards the airport. It is expected to arrive at the destination safely in 7 minutes."
Looking at the calm water outside and the distant woods and airport, Shion's heart gradually calmed down.
After getting out of the safety chair, she looked out the window.
“This is such a beautiful place”
"Yeah, it's like solving the crisis and going back to Second Miltia"
"Yeah, it's just a lot less people..." Allen looked around and said melancholy.

Off topic:
The new one, there is a small preview (I really don’t want spoilers to be skipped consciously: the next episode is very likely to have the main/secondary characters that have appeared in xenosaga but I like, I will It describes his/her/it's appearance in a more reasonable way. However, if you have any suggestions or wish to include Shion's characters (more reasonable, like Kevin, William, etc.), you also You can reply directly or tell me in other ways, I will do my best to finish the writing of this character!