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On another note, my friend sent me some fountain pen ink recently, and I noticed a familiar name:
Photo of a box of fountain pen ink cartridges labeled 'Namiki''Namiki'
I know this, the writing brush told me that karen mentioned that Namiki she knows is a pen maker.
But this is definitely a coincidence, two friends of mine asked us if they could be in the novel when they heard that we were going to write a novel. As a result, I arranged Lucas and Namiki for them (I didn't know what the names of these two people were at the time, so I used my friend's English name).
Well, it's a pity that Namiki is dead in Vol.1, it should have been arranged for her to live a little longer
 
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I think Xenosaga says a lot about the ways that a seemingly small action, like the relationship between a parent and their child, can change the course of the universe. In Jr.'s case, his relationship with his father was definitely really bad, but his and Gaignun's paths were changed through the kindness of people like Helmer and Sakura, so they didn't suffer the same fate as the other URTVs.
You make a lot of sense! xenosaga many times also want to reflect the various misunderstandings and love between parents and children.
Like Shion and Suou, the adult Shion thinks Suou is experimenting on Aoi, but in fact he isn't, Suou is just trying to cure her (but little Shion never found that out?)
But then it completely changed her opinion, especially after thoroughly learning the truth. The scene where she says goodbye to her father at the end is also very touching, as the person Suou thought he didn't know is actually the grown-up Shion he will never see.
Jr. always seemed to loathe his father, and that never changed.
MOMO, errr, did she ever meet Mizrahi in the very beginning? I'm a little unsure about that.
Coming back to Nephilim above, one of the things that is hard for her to say is that there is very little about her throughout the saga. There are only so many references to her in xs1.
1. her name is Nephilim
2. she claims to be the voice of time
3. she seems to be translucent in reality
AMY inside at least states that she also has a father.
Maybe her father loves her, but at least at the end he loves her very pervertedly (allow me to use that word), which reminds me of the Dawn King in "From the Abyss" (I don't know his English name yet), who does something disgusting to his daughter Prussika (not only in content, but also in images and techniques), in order to make his In order to make his daughter, no more pain (I may not be describing it accurately, but it should be), he made Prussika into a cartridge (I won't go into the details of the process here, because it seems to violate the rules of the NSWF piece similar to rules).
Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that Grimoire and this father feel pretty much the same, and although the techniques are different, the results are basically the same. I think Grimoire also killed Nephy because of a similar sick love. What I don't really know is his motivation, because it's not explained clearly in the game.
 
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But in fact, I failed to understand the point is whether saga did not explain clearly the specific details of the contact with zohar, or how to research the set of contact with zohar, because in the AMY can see Almadel and Nephy use the device feel similar.
I'm sure this will cause huge problems for us in writing the story later, but I'll continue to investigate/imagine
 
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"Nephilim, you can't talk to the chaos like that!" Grimoire said.
"Wuuuu, dad, you do too." Nephilim grabbed Grimoire's body even harder and said softly in his ear with a trembling voice: "But can you carry me upstairs? I want to lie down and rest for a while."
"Of course, chaos, can you wait a little?" Grimoire picked up Nephilim
"Yes, I'll wait." chaos said to Nephilim again, "Good night, Nephilim."
Nephilim, on the other hand, looked angrily at chaos from her father's shoulder as he went upstairs.
"Nephy," Grimoire squatted down on the edge of the bed after tucking Nephilim in, looking at her levelly, "will you listen to me?"
"Well, Daddy, what are you going to say?"
"The chaos thing, you don't have to do what you just did again, okay? People are just trying to comfort you, but the way you just acted only made him think you were emotionless, okay?"
"Whatever he does!" Nephilim wiped the tears from the corners of his eyes with the blanket and said, "Why should I care what he thinks?"
"Well then, get some rest," Grimoire said, standing up and turning off the light: "We'll talk about it later." And then he closed the door.

off topic.
I'll update that much for now, and I'll write more tomorrow.
Will the character of Nephilim be portrayed in a strange way?
Thanks for everyone‘s support!
 
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"Sorry chaos, for keeping you waiting" Grimoire sat down across from chaos
"It's okay, I can understand that you will be very busy these days"
"Yes, and it will be afterwards, because there is no one to take care of Nephilim" said Grimoire: "That's one of the things I wanted to talk to you about"
"William told me about it, he said I could help you take care of and protect Nephilim"
"Well, the lab side you love that in don't have to be too responsible, I still have enough people over there"
"Okay, but, Nephilim really want me to take care of?" chaos asked doubtfully, he had not taken care of small children before: "And could you also use more time to spend with her? After all, you're her real father."
"No, actually I was going to bring her inside the lab, but then I thought it was too dangerous to do so"
"Hey" chaos sighed, closed one eye, the remaining one is with a cunning jackpot gaze at Grimoire, mouth a smile said: "Well. Let's just say I'm her brother~"
off topic
The last part will be integrated later
 
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"Mr. Grimoire, I think we are still not at the point where we can conduct contact experiments. You know, we haven't been able to do much research on its most basic nature, let alone directly carry out such dangerous things!" After listening After Grimoire's request, Kelisi said: "What's more, the current situation is not good, at least we have to wait until it is completely evacuated, right?"
"Indeed" Grimoire looked at the scattered wiring harnesses and partially boxed instruments around and shook his head: "Even with the existing equipment, it is difficult to complete this experiment, let alone safety"
"Yes, so let's talk about it after the relocation is completed!" Kelisi packed his things: "I'm leaving, do you want to go together? Or do you go back by yourself?"
"No, I have to keep it today"
"Well, remember to spend more time with your daughter! Is she taken care of?" Kelisi asked suspiciously, "Do you want me to pick her up?"
"No, no, chaos has gone"
"chaos?"

"Nephy, here!" Seeing Nephilim, chaos waved at her and called out to her
"Chaos..." After Nephilim said goodbye to her classmates, she called chaos in a low voice: "Don't call me that, you have no right to do that! And why didn't father come? Even if he didn't come, you shouldn't be the one to pick him up me?"
"Your father is very busy." Chaos said softly, holding Nephilim's hand, but was quickly thrown away: "He told me to remember to come here and wait for you, now, shall we go home?"
"Go away, I'll go back by myself" Nephilim yelled at Chaos, and walked home alone.
"Nephilim..." Chaos looked at her back and sighed softly, then walked behind her.

A little snippet to add:
"Nephilim, eat dinner!" Chaos brought out the dinner he made.
"Isn't Dad coming back?" Nephilim took the bowl: "Also, what is this?!" Looking at the dark dinner in the bowl.
"Is this dinner?" Chaos asked in surprise, "Don't you want to eat?"
"Err" Nephilim tried to convince herself that she tasted the delicacies of mountains and seas after taking the first bite, but she still didn't have the courage to take the second bite, and spit all the first bite and part of the gastric juice into the bowl.
"I'm sorry, I really can't eat anymore." Nephilim stood up: "Or it's because what you made is so unpalatable!" She went upstairs and hid in her room
"Hey, Nephilim..." Chaos looked at her room: "I'm angry!"

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The most interesting thing is that the previous document is Vol. 2 The description of the ending, and today's translation is indeed Vol. 2 The beginning of the plot XD
 
I don't know if I can say something, but I really feel that I can't update anymore. . . I'm really sorry everyone, but, I just don't know what to write. To be honest, this thing was originally written as an entertainment project between Xie and me, so we will be more interested in writing the first chapter, but we will obviously feel that we can’t write it in the second chapter. And emptiness, it is the kind of content that clearly has a story frame, but can't write anything, and what is written is all nonsense and meaningless content. . . Actually, if I finish writing it, I won't give myself a high score, this thing is not worth it, this story can be said to be the worst Xenosaga fan fiction ever. . . I just want to finish Xie's Nephilim story, but I think maybe I'm not really suitable for this role of storytelling and storytelling. Perhaps for Xie, getting a completely logical and self-consistent Nephilim story line is a very satisfying result, but for me, I really don't like what I wrote. I used to think it was a very simple thing, just like what I wrote before but then I found out that I was wrong, big mistake, it is too difficult to write such a long article that requires a lot of details It's really really difficult. I found out at the very beginning of updating Vol.2. In fact, there are only three articles to write in Vol.2, but I have to use my ability to add details to more than 10 articles. Except for those three articles The rest of my creation other than the main one is a pile of crap. . . I'm a little bit at a loss as to what to do, I've clearly written some key turning points and plots, but I can't make any content that connects them for the time being, or the only content that exists as a connection is some very Poor and pointless writing.
I don't know if I or Xie (who still has a little confidence) will continue to update our writing, but I don't think it will be updated much in the past two months. . . Sorry, really. . .
 
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It's okay to pause a story for a while, or forever. I have fics I wrote years ago that I still like, but probably won't ever finish writing. Others I might write more for someday. Don't force yourself if you're not feeling good about it. When it feels fun again, you can enjoy it again!
 
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